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Maccaboy17 Lonely Fan

Joined: 14 Nov 2006 Posts: 168 Location: Great Britain
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 2:09 pm Post subject: Script episode 'I'm Glad Bree's better' |
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ok this my script on what i think might happen, but not in the next video in a slightly later video after bree's feeling beter and with Daniel goes off hiking or something for a few days as a treat for bree and naturally they make a video about it, this is what I think Jonas's video will be while they are away, tell me what you think
[Jonas's libary and Jonas is sitting in the hot seat]
Jonas: OK well Beast took Bree hiking or swiming or whatever they do, so its just me here [edit of jonas sitting at a different position] ok I just watched Beast's video looks like they've been having fun [drums on table] so I'm going have some fun of my own i'm going to talk about [sound of glass breaking Jonas looks back over his left sholder] what the fu...
[sudden edit Jonas is sitting further away from the camera with tape over his mouth and hands and feet tied to the chair sitting slumped wih eyes closed, unconcious. Gemma steps into shot looks at jonas then looks into camera and grins wolfishly]
Gemma: Hello bree, have you missed me? my my you have been so very difficult for the past few months but it ends now no more games, either give yourself up to the Order, and dont even think about trying to go to the police or [pulls out a swich blade and presses the butten and the blade flicks out then takes a long step towards the tethered jonas] or you will have provoked us and you shall be rewarded for your actions. And as such pretty boy here shall face our wrath. _________________ God is not on the side of the big battalions but on the finest shots |
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yoruba Lonely Fan

Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 168 Location: austria
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:09 pm Post subject: |
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That's awesome! I definately think that should happen!  _________________ i love lettuce |
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Maccaboy17 Lonely Fan

Joined: 14 Nov 2006 Posts: 168 Location: Great Britain
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:19 pm Post subject: |
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thanks _________________ God is not on the side of the big battalions but on the finest shots |
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shanabanana19 Casual Observer

Joined: 28 Dec 2006 Posts: 47 Location: Completely Lost
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:31 pm Post subject: |
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Whoa. _________________ Gemma-- Don't hold your breath.
We can't resist, can we Beast??? |
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AniDonia Lonely Fan

Joined: 24 Nov 2006 Posts: 164 Location: The Deuce
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:41 pm Post subject: |
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I don't think Gemma would talk like that, and I think she's been captured/killed... buuuuuut
This script is like 900% better than the last "script" that popped up on the board. So, *MUAH*. |
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jobee13 Enthusiastic Fan

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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:42 pm Post subject: |
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I think it should be Cassie, not Gemma  _________________ Would the real Cassie please stand up?! |
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betz28 The Order of Denderah

Joined: 18 Sep 2006 Posts: 4833 Location: 'sippi
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:45 pm Post subject: |
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i like it...i think it should be gemma - back from the dead  |
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Maccaboy17 Lonely Fan

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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:48 pm Post subject: |
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AniDonia wrote: | I don't think Gemma would talk like that, and I think she's been captured/killed... buuuuuut
This script is like 900% better than the last "script" that popped up on the board. So, *MUAH*. |
i know what i wanst so sure about what to make Gemma say so i used an adapted version of an Op Aphid video for the threat at the end and winged the rest _________________ God is not on the side of the big battalions but on the finest shots |
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girlAnachronism Enthusiastic Fan

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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 4:19 pm Post subject: |
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That would be a kickass twist. Though i doubt Gemma is still around. If she is, Brother has a LOT of explaining to do. |
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Maccaboy17 Lonely Fan

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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 4:30 pm Post subject: |
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girlAnachronism wrote: | That would be a kickass twist. Though i doubt Gemma is still around. If she is, Brother has a LOT of explaining to do. |
well i thought about putting somehting like showing a wound to the camera (not the sort of thing that the creator like to do) or haivng an arm in a sling the (but that beggers belief about how she could incapasitate Jonas)
a good thing might be if she wears her hair so its covering half her face do just add a touch of mystery and imply whats happened _________________ God is not on the side of the big battalions but on the finest shots |
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iamcool The Order of Denderah

Joined: 01 Oct 2006 Posts: 5981 Location: England
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 5:07 pm Post subject: |
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lol thats pretty good but how would gemma over power a boxer? lol _________________ my name is josh, not iamcool or iam or cool
cooltron5000 is also accepted
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Maccaboy17 Lonely Fan

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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 5:13 pm Post subject: |
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iamcool wrote: | lol thats pretty good but how would gemma over power a boxer? lol |
years of being an agent op aphid she probably has loads of tricks and martial art techniques _________________ God is not on the side of the big battalions but on the finest shots |
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iamcool The Order of Denderah

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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 5:18 pm Post subject: |
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wouldnt jonas just lay her out? lol _________________ my name is josh, not iamcool or iam or cool
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Killthesmiley The Order of Denderah

Joined: 30 Oct 2006 Posts: 4732 Location: Halifax NS Canada
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 5:21 pm Post subject: |
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iamcool wrote: | wouldnt jonas just lay her out? lol |
yup and gemma is captured and/or dead....
and Oppy is MIA ...
soo....
leaves no one else to perform this _________________ kelly
YOU: Who does that KTS think she is? Total bitch!
ME: I think I'm you, only better.
~Kelly, KMurr, and Kellylen <3~ |
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Maccaboy17 Lonely Fan

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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 5:21 pm Post subject: |
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iamcool wrote: | wouldnt jonas just lay her out? lol |
ok then she his him over the back of the head when he goes to investigat the broken window _________________ God is not on the side of the big battalions but on the finest shots |
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