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stuart2004 · The Order of Denderah Joined: 09 Nov 2006 Posts: 2735

OK here is my newest one...... I like it and I find it easier to read.....

Inside circle LG15
Middle circle = ARG
Outside circle = Inactive characters
Any character on a line has had direct interaction with both the ARG and LG15(I.E. Tachyon....Gemma.....)

Let me know what you think
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Killthesmiley · Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 7:18 am Post subject:

it's a little unorginized.
Just a better layout is needed, as well as straighter lines.

I suggest 3 columns, or possibly a circle...
But i think this is a good idea. It would be helpful I think to some of the newcomers.
(also remember, we are assuming that OpAphid is a representative of the Order. you have them as seperate catagories. I personally, wouldn't have done so.)
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lonelyelendi · Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:39 am Post subject:

I agree with Kelly!
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lg15panda · Casual Observer Joined: 04 Dec 2006 Posts: 95

About the "Random Watchers" -- what's the evidence that they're with OpAphid? As far as I know, they seem to have been associated with The Order.

Killthesmiley · Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 11:28 am Post subject:

"Adventures in Babysitting" is the proof lg15panda. Plus the Order is OpAphid.
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sweetcharade518 · Suspiciously Absent Joined: 08 Jan 2007 Posts: 21

That reminds me of the chart on the L word!

My only suggestion would be straighter and thicker lines, so it's easier to read. But it is a good idea!
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lg15panda · Casual Observer Joined: 04 Dec 2006 Posts: 95

Well if the Order is OpAphid, maybe you can simplify things and just have one box that says "The Order (OpAphid)".

Killthesmiley · Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:49 pm Post subject:

thats what I suggested
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teehee, but I think the general agreement is that its a bit messy, jsut clean it up and get rid of the excess box and it will be useful.
THe messier it is the more difficult it is to read and understand.
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iamcool · Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 3:03 pm Post subject:

it kinda does
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Sarah of the Dead · Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:15 pm Post subject:

You don't need the box that says "friends", do you?
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lg15panda · Casual Observer Joined: 04 Dec 2006 Posts: 95

If we want to instead say that OpAphid is a person, then it makes sense to leave her as her own box. But then we need to clarify certain things:

1) "The Order" is the organization that OpAphid (the person) belongs to?
2) Gemma is "directly connected" to OpAphid (the person), where the proof is in the "Gemma III" vid?
3) Gemma is "possibly connected" or "directly connected" to the Order?

Also where the hell is Lucy?
- Lucy would be "directly connected" to the Order?
- Lucy is "possibly connected" to OpAphid (the person)? (though there's no solid proof of this)
- Lucy was directly connected to Bree
- Lucy was directly connected to Bree's father/mother
- Lucy is "possibly connected" to random watchers/deacons?

I think that this map will probably be too confusing.

diastres · Lonely Fan Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 151

Just a quick note:

The normal capitalization of "WarpyLOL" is warpylol.

However, in Tach's letter to Brother is was "War Pylol" (A name?) and it was "WarPylol" when it was a password.

JustAnotherLonelyGirl. · Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 6:58 pm Post subject:

Thank you for this! It's a good idea.
I just would suggest some straighter lines and better organization, like Kelly said.
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alex · Casual Observer Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 124

that shows mr. bree has interacted with all of bree's friends, but there's no saying for sure that he's ever interacted with jonas. jonas just saw him a few times, as far as the videos show.

stuart2004 · The Order of Denderah Joined: 09 Nov 2006 Posts: 2735

I love all the comments and I promise to correct it and use the ideas given....forgive me this is only the second draft and I wanted some input on it..........