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TJ Marsh · Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 4:07 pm Post subject:

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voyboy · Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 8:17 pm Post subject:

Scene opens with Iris in the tub and while his Father is questioning his odd behavior.

Dad: What's been the matter the past few days?

IRIS: I'm sorry I've troubled you. I don't want to worry you. I don't want to worry anyone.

Dad: Is it all on account of...because of Bree? Because she
doesn't call for you anymore?

IRIS: I don't know. I don't know, Dad.

Dad: I have a mind to call that girl and tell her....

IRIS: (sitting up furiously and screaming) Don't you dare! Don't you dare, Dad! (He covers her face with both hands and lies back down into the tub - and then tries asserts himself, with his right hand covering his mouth.) Don't you dare! Don't you dare!...No, Dad! Daddy, if you do something like that, I'll do something desperate! I will, I will, Dad! I will!

Dad: (standing over him) Iris, how serious had you and Bree become? I mean, well, you know what I mean. Iris- had she - had anything serious happened? Did she - did she spoil you?

IRIS: (raging and laughing hysterically and uncontrollably) Spoil??? Did she spoil me? (He turns and submerges his head under the steaming water. He flails around and then sits up again.) No. No, Dad! (hatefully) I'm not spoiled! I'm not spoiled, Dad! I'm just as fresh and I'm virginal like the day I was born, Dad!

Dad: Stop it! Stop it!

IRIS: I'm a lovely virginal creature who wouldn't think of being spoiled! (He stands up in the tub and steps out with his arms outstretched.) I've been a good little boy, Dad! I've been a good little, good little, good little boy! I've always done everything Daddy and Mommy tell me. I've obeyed every word. I hate you, I hate you, I HATE YOU!

Father runs out of bathroom in tears.
(Fade to black)

TJ Marsh · Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 10:14 pm Post subject:

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voyboy · Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 8:15 pm Post subject:

Iris,

I wrote that lovely script and you just laugh? Its a very serious drama.

TJ Marsh · Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 8:41 pm Post subject:

I Laughed because i like it, never know what me and the Crew will choose Wink

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licoricesniper · Casual Observer Joined: 12 Dec 2006 Posts: 116

Iris, if you do choose the tub scene keep it decent and wear swim trunks.
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voyboy · Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 11:19 am Post subject:

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TJ Marsh · Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 2:31 pm Post subject:

Darn, lol
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Brucker · Casual Observer Joined: 13 Oct 2006 Posts: 91

Let's poll on it.
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TJ Marsh · Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 11:04 am Post subject:

A transcript has been chosen and will be up on the 16 of Feb. The name will be posted that day.
Thanks all that submit one.
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voyboy · Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 11:08 am Post subject:

Killthesmiley · Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 11:46 am Post subject: