The Day of the Eternal Song - Revision history

Shiori at 19:49, 17 February 2009

2009-02-17T19:49:31Z

Zoey at 05:11, 21 July 2008

2008-07-21T05:11:31Z

ZoeyBot: changing John Palmer to only editor.

2008-07-08T17:54:45Z

changing John Palmer to only editor.

FH14 at 18:58, 28 May 2008

2008-05-28T18:58:46Z

Zoey at 11:53, 28 May 2008

2008-05-28T11:53:32Z

Zoey: adding Balthazar's name

2008-05-28T11:48:18Z

adding Balthazar's name

FH14 at 20:13, 22 May 2008

2008-05-22T20:13:24Z

Zoey at 05:37, 18 May 2008

2008-05-18T05:37:40Z

Shiori at 14:34, 7 May 2008

2008-05-07T14:34:07Z

Bomberchick: /* Notes */ wording

2008-05-05T22:56:29Z

‎Notes: wording

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 {{Blog
 | name        = {{PAGENAME}}
 | number      = 230
 | image       = KM230-AngrySteve.jpg

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 {{VidChar|Jeremy|Yusuf Pirhasan}}
 {{VidChar|Sofina|KateModern cameos#Shuo Zhang{{!}}Shuo Zhang}}
-{{VidChar|Hymn of One member|KateModern cameos#Liangjing Li{{!}}Liangjing Li}}
+{{VidChar|The Day of the Eternal Song{{!}}Hymn of One member|KateModern cameos#Liangjing Li{{!}}Liangjing Li}}
 {{VidChar|Rupert Van Helden|Ronan Summers}}
 {{VidChar|Balthazar|Louis Figgis}}

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 | vidplay = Lawrence Tallis
 | story = Luke Hyams, Neil Mossey, and Lawrence Tallis
-| editor = Yusuf Pirhasan and John Palmer
+| editor = John Palmer
 | song =
 | cast =

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 {{VidChar|Balthazar|Louis Figgis}}
 {{VidChar|Steve}}
 | Previous    = Precious Blood: 10:30PM
 | Next        = The Drugs Do Work

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 '''Rupert:''' (''Smiles at Julia''.) Hey. This is her.
-'''Hymn of One member:''' Okay.
+'''Balthazar:''' Okay.
 '''Rupert:''' Uh... Um, do we- Do we really need the camera in here today?
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 '''Julia:''' Well, honey, I-I wanted to document the event to show everyone how normal you are.
-'''Rupert:''' (''Smiles''.) Didn't I tell you she was great? Look, I need my suit in the next hour; so can you get on that straight away? (''The Hymn of One member nods''.) Yep? (''Slaps him on the back''.)
+'''Rupert:''' (''Smiles''.) Didn't I tell you she was great? Look, I need my suit in the next hour; so can you get on that straight away? (''Balthazar nods''.) Yep? (''Slaps him on the back''.)
-'''Hymn of One member:''' Cool.
+'''Balthazar:''' Cool.
 '''Rupert:''' Thank you. (''Turns to Julia''.)
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 '''Rupert:''' Okay. (''Kisses Julia''.)
-(''Cut to Rupert walking behind a table covered with glasses filled with different juices, practicing his lecture. The two girls are helping to decorate, and speak Mandarin to each other. The other Hymn of One member in the room adjusts the chairs to be perfectly aligned. Cut to the girls decorating and then back to Rupert practicing his lecture''.)
+(''Cut to Rupert walking behind a table covered with glasses filled with different juices, practicing his lecture. The two girls are helping to decorate, and speak Mandarin to each other. Balthazar adjusts the chairs to be perfectly aligned. Cut to the girls decorating and then back to Rupert practicing his lecture''.)
 '''Julia:''' Honey, why don't you say a little something?
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 '''Rupert:''' Now, hang on. This is completely out of order.
-'''Steve:''' Out of order? I'll tell you what's out of order! (''A Hymn of One member moves to stop Steve, but Rupert blocks him''.) Feeding people lies! Preying on their vulnerabilities! And stopping people living their lives!
+'''Steve:''' Out of order? I'll tell you what's out of order! (''Balthazar moves to stop Steve, but Rupert blocks him''.) Feeding people lies! Preying on their vulnerabilities! And stopping people living their lives!
 '''Rupert:''' Now, hang on, that is enough! Alright? If you don't want to be here and be part of our joy, then that is one thing, but-

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 (''Julia exits the cubicle and walks over to the sinks. She sets the camera down on the counter and checks herself out in the mirror. Cut to Julia walking down the main hall in the Hymn of One Centre. Cut to Julia ascending the staircase to the second story''.)
-'''Hymn of One member:''' Hi. You must be Julia. (''Shakes Julia's hand''.)
+'''Jeremy:''' Hi. You must be Julia. (''Shakes Julia's hand''.)
 '''Julia:''' Hi, nice to meet you.
-'''Hymn of One member:''' Nice to meet you.
+'''Jeremy:''' Nice to meet you.
 (''Julia continues up the stairs. She enters the main room, where Rupert and several more Hymn of One members are preparing for the day. Julia walks toward Rupert and is greeted by two girls''.)

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 | cast =
 {{VidChar|Julia}}
-{{VidChar|Hymn of One member|Yusuf Pirhasan}}
+{{VidChar|Jeremy|Yusuf Pirhasan}}
 {{VidChar|Hymn of One member|KateModern cameos#Shuo Zhang{{!}}Shuo Zhang}}
 {{VidChar|Hymn of One member|KateModern cameos#Liangjing Li{{!}}Liangjing Li}}

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 *With this video comes a new subtitle for the series, "In the Name of KateModern" now that we already know who committed the crime.
-*This video marks one of the rare times that a Hymn of One uses a non-music metaphor.  Rupert calling Steve ''"a lost sheep"'' that ''"has returned to the flock"'' is a visual usually associated with Christian teachings.
+*This video marks one of the rare times that a Hymn of One member uses a non-music metaphor.  Rupert calls Steve ''"a lost sheep"'' that has ''"returned to the flock,"'' which is a visual usually associated with Christian teachings.
-*In a newer blog from Steve, via his bebo page, on April 11th, he writes the following blog entitled "[http://www.bebo.com/BlogView.jsp?MemberId=4559170159&BlogId=6339609925 Changes]":
+*In a newer blog from Steve via his Bebo page, on April 11th he writes the following under the title "[http://www.bebo.com/BlogView.jsp?MemberId=4559170159&BlogId=6339609925 Changes]":
 :''"This is to let everyone know that I am officially done with the Hymn of One. The whole organisation is a scam designed to control people's mind's and milk them out of their cash. Rupert Van Helden is pious hypocrite and deserves to exposed for the charlatan that he is. I'm gonna make it my mission to do so. To anyone who still believes in the Hymn of Nonsense: Open your eyes. Get out whilst you still have some brain left."''