Okay, so here's kind of how I think this article should be structured.
The topic sentece is fine, "The Lullaby Project is a plan formed during the union between the Hymn Of One, Wyman Foundation, and Verdus Pharmaceuticals." but from there I think we need to fill in a TON of information. Everything about what is going on down at the Lullaby Project. It might even make sense to include the section currently called "The True Nature of The Partnership" in the text of what we know about the Lullaby Project.
I then think once that is taken care of, the section called "The Public Presentation of the Partnership" should be renamed and the focus should be on how the companies joined together to come up with the project. Because "The Lullaby Project" is not the partnership.. but the "organization" that came out of the partnership.
I think these changes will make the article much better and clearer! Thanks in advance to anyone who helps out! --Zoey 02:10, 20 December 2007 (CST)