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tigerlilylynn Moderator
Joined: 20 Sep 2006 Posts: 891 Location: Ohio
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 11:39 am Post subject: |
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iamcool wrote: | tigerlilylynn wrote: | iamcool wrote: | Iris' friend : hey i think its bed time, good night iris
Iris: good night
Iris' friend: iris, whats the touching my bum? |
*sporfle* |
what does sporfle mean? lol |
it's a laughing sound <3 _________________ Better than a high school reunion!! |
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TJ Marsh Thor's Hammer
Joined: 07 Oct 2006 Posts: 1483 Location: Stalked by Flautapantera.
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 4:07 pm Post subject: |
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_________________ Long live LG15. |
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voyboy Thor's Hammer
Joined: 10 Nov 2006 Posts: 1011 Location: Los Angeles
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 8:17 pm Post subject: |
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Scene opens with Iris in the tub and while his Father is questioning his odd behavior.
Dad: What's been the matter the past few days?
IRIS: I'm sorry I've troubled you. I don't want to worry you. I don't want to worry anyone.
Dad: Is it all on account of...because of Bree? Because she
doesn't call for you anymore?
IRIS: I don't know. I don't know, Dad.
Dad: I have a mind to call that girl and tell her....
IRIS: (sitting up furiously and screaming) Don't you dare! Don't you dare, Dad! (He covers her face with both hands and lies back down into the tub - and then tries asserts himself, with his right hand covering his mouth.) Don't you dare! Don't you dare!...No, Dad! Daddy, if you do something like that, I'll do something desperate! I will, I will, Dad! I will!
Dad: (standing over him) Iris, how serious had you and Bree become? I mean, well, you know what I mean. Iris- had she - had anything serious happened? Did she - did she spoil you?
IRIS: (raging and laughing hysterically and uncontrollably) Spoil??? Did she spoil me? (He turns and submerges his head under the steaming water. He flails around and then sits up again.) No. No, Dad! (hatefully) I'm not spoiled! I'm not spoiled, Dad! I'm just as fresh and I'm virginal like the day I was born, Dad!
Dad: Stop it! Stop it!
IRIS: I'm a lovely virginal creature who wouldn't think of being spoiled! (He stands up in the tub and steps out with his arms outstretched.) I've been a good little boy, Dad! I've been a good little, good little, good little boy! I've always done everything Daddy and Mommy tell me. I've obeyed every word. I hate you, I hate you, I HATE YOU!
Father runs out of bathroom in tears.
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TJ Marsh Thor's Hammer
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 10:14 pm Post subject: |
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_________________ Long live LG15. |
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voyboy Thor's Hammer
Joined: 10 Nov 2006 Posts: 1011 Location: Los Angeles
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 8:15 pm Post subject: |
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Iris,
I wrote that lovely script and you just laugh? Its a very serious drama. |
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TJ Marsh Thor's Hammer
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 8:41 pm Post subject: |
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I Laughed because i like it, never know what me and the Crew will choose _________________ Long live LG15. |
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licoricesniper Casual Observer
Joined: 12 Dec 2006 Posts: 116
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 12:35 am Post subject: |
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Iris, if you do choose the tub scene keep it decent and wear swim trunks. _________________ www.lost.eu/30522
DO IT!!! |
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voyboy Thor's Hammer
Joined: 10 Nov 2006 Posts: 1011 Location: Los Angeles
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 11:19 am Post subject: |
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licoricesniper wrote: | Iris, if you do choose the tub scene keep it decent and wear swim trunks. |
yes I forgot to mention that there is no nudity shown in that scene. LOL |
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licoricesniper Casual Observer
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 2:14 pm Post subject: |
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voyboy wrote: | licoricesniper wrote: | Iris, if you do choose the tub scene keep it decent and wear swim trunks. |
yes I forgot to mention that there is no nudity shown in that scene. LOL |
That's right, keep it weenie free, okay? _________________ www.lost.eu/30522
DO IT!!! |
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licoricesniper Casual Observer
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 2:16 pm Post subject: |
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voyboy wrote: | licoricesniper wrote: | Iris, if you do choose the tub scene keep it decent and wear swim trunks. |
yes I forgot to mention that there is no nudity shown in that scene. LOL |
That's right, keep it weenie free, okay? _________________ www.lost.eu/30522
DO IT!!! |
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TJ Marsh Thor's Hammer
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 2:31 pm Post subject: |
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Darn, lol _________________ Long live LG15. |
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Brucker Casual Observer
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 9:36 am Post subject: |
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Let's poll on it. _________________ -BRUCKER
Teen1: He's cool.
Teen2: Are you being sarcastic, dude?
Teen1: I don't even know anymore.
(The Simpsons, "Homerpalooza") |
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TJ Marsh Thor's Hammer
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 11:04 am Post subject: |
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A transcript has been chosen and will be up on the 16 of Feb. The name will be posted that day.
Thanks all that submit one. _________________ Long live LG15. |
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voyboy Thor's Hammer
Joined: 10 Nov 2006 Posts: 1011 Location: Los Angeles
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 11:08 am Post subject: |
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Iris2009 wrote: | A transcript has been chosen and will be up on the 16 of Feb. The name will be posted that day.
Thanks all that submit one. |
please send my residual checks to:
Mr. V. Boy
c/o William Morris Agency
Literary Dept.
Beverly Hills CA 90210 |
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Killthesmiley The Order of Denderah
Joined: 30 Oct 2006 Posts: 4732 Location: Halifax NS Canada
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 11:46 am Post subject: |
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to me that reads "Mr Vagina Boy"
....lmao. I loves you V.Boy! _________________ kelly
YOU: Who does that KTS think she is? Total bitch!
ME: I think I'm you, only better.
~Kelly, KMurr, and Kellylen <3~ |
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