Talk:Facility J

Luminous, I have a few suggestions and/or questions, but take it with a grain of salt, since I'm not following the Facility J story line closely.

1. I think there are too many sections on the page. Is there a way to consolidate them? In particular,

A. If the discussion threads are discussing specific videos, it makes sense to me to put the link with that video's information in some way. Are they?

B. The "important links" are character-specific, so why not make a character section listing the characters with links to their personal pages after their names and/or descriptions?

C. "Locations" is a single sentence. Does it really need to be separated from the intro paragraph?

2. I'm not sure why there is a separate section for Walter's videos. If his videos are part of the story, then shouldn't they be listed in order with the others?

3. Even though we're only putting this on a single page at this time, do you think it might be nice to have a template for these videos (albeit a very different sort than we've been using on other videos) that would give a little more style and uniformity to the page?

Not trying to step on your toes, here; you've done some great work, but it looks like it could be tidied up a bit. -BRUCKER (Home/Talk/Contribs) 14:00, 2 March 2007 (CST)

Thanks Brucker :)

I'm new to editing WIKI's. I read them alot, but I dont't know much about editing protocals and techniques, as this is the first page I've authored. You just taught me alot. I welcome your advice. And thanks for cleaning up the page. It's much improved!

Game Play Recaps

Hi, I just wanted to let everyone know I'm working on gameplay recaps to be posted in the next day or so. If someone else is working on this as well, get in touch with me so we can split the work rather than being redundant.

Correct Title

Should this be Facility J or FacilityJ? I've noticed that there are links to both pages on LGPedia, so I was wondering which one was correct.--Jonpro 12:44, 20 March 2007 (CDT)