Difference between revisions of "Talk:Lonelygirl15 The Story So Far..."

Revision as of 21:35, 22 November 2006

I think this is just a talk page so we can just type ideas or whatever. While whats on the story so far page is great I think they might have been after a recount of the story itself rather than the real life parts of lonelygirl, which is what the page is becomming.

Abba12 17:32, 16 November 2006 (PST)

That would have been my interpretation as well but it was kind of ambiguous. I think a summary of the story would be nice but at the moment it just looks like a repeat of stuff posted elsewhere which is not very productive.--modelmotion 17:38, 16 November 2006 (PST)

A concise yet comprehensive summary is what the Creators had in mind, but they appreciate all efforts made towards this project. -- Twjaniak 17:50, 16 November 2006 (PST)

I expanded the beginning of the story to give background information in a hopefully concise manner. If the purpose is to summarize the story (plot and conflicts) for the newbie, hopefully this is helpful. Although this information is posted in other areas, it is not presented as a whole, organic story that follows the plot structure. I hope this is helpful. --User:71.24.65.248 17 November 2006

Another poster added some helpful notes. I will expand upon these notes later today. User:Ogog 22 November 2006 (9:49a.m. EST)

I will try to continue Lucy and the ceremony situation as time permits:
Daniel sees Bree leaving with a woman and follows them
Bree introduces Lucy
Daniel follows Bree and Lucy to an office/medical park
Bree responds and warns Daniel
Daniel researches Bree's religion
Bree sheds light on her religion
Daniel becomes worried as he researches
Bree is excited about the ceremony
Daniel follows Bree to the ceremony --User:Ogog 22 November 2006 (4:31 p.m.EST)